Writing groups, research and news!

Some of you will know I’m a big fan of writer support groups, both online and in person and am a member of several. My local group is called Chindi and I’ve benefitted from all their support and encouragement.

Today, I’m delighted to be interviewing one of my Chindi buddies, Patricia Osborne, who is celebrating the publication of her new book, The Coal Miner’s Son, this week. Since we write in different genres there is no direct overlap in our books, but the writing process has many similarities and we focussed on the research process here. Over to her …

Firstly, thank you to Lexi for inviting me over to her blog during my ‘Chindi Author of the Week’ which happens to coincide with publication of my second novel, The Coal Miner’s Son. 

When it comes to writing family sagas, my favourite era is the 50s and 60s. This is partly due to the fact that my late mum would have been a similar age to my protagonist Grace Granville in House of Grace (Book 1 of the trilogy) which meant that I already had a fair grasp of what life was like in Britain during those decades. My mum inspired my character, Grace Granville, and Jack Gilmore, Grace’s first love, was based on aspects of my dad. On my regular visits to Mum, I’d quiz her on details such as what Dad was wearing when they first met and where they went for their first date. 

Patricia’s mum (on left) aged sixteen.

Reading family sagas, non-fiction books, and watching television series played a big part in my research. For example, I researched mining accidents, and coal miners’ wives’ communities. George Orwell’s Road to Wigan Pier aided the latter and it was from this I was able to create a coal miner’s wife. 

Mr Selfridge and House of Elliott were particular inspirations for House of Grace while a villain, Reverend Osborne Whitworth in Poldark inspired my villain, Sir Gregory Giles, in The Coal Miner’s Son. 

Facebook memories of Bolton sites were really good sources for research in the fifties and in particular the FB Palais site. The members were so helpful in providing details right down to what the furnishings were like in the dance hall in 1950, how all the youngsters would meet their boy or girlfriends under the clock, and even how much a cup of coffee cost. I’m pleased to say that when these members read House of Grace they felt they were back all those years in the Palais. 

One of my aunties helped me choose an illness in the early sixties that could be a childhood killer at that time which I was able to use in House of Grace. I followed this up with research, making my first port of call the internet, and at that time I was also lucky enough to have access to Brighton University online library, in particular searching academic sites such as JSTOR. 

Researching the sixties was easier for me as I was able to build on my own memories. For instance, poor Mum dragging a tin bath in from the backyard and filling it up with water boiled in buckets on the stove. And the dread of having to go outside in the yard to the toilet, especially when it was cold and wet – these recollections enabled me to enact scenes in The Coal Miner’s Son when George bathes in the tin tub by the fire. 

To heighten these memories and fill in any gaps, I studied non-fiction books such as: “A 1950s Childhood: From Tin Baths to Bread and Drippingand “A 1960s Childhood: From Thunderbirds to Beatlemaniaboth by Paul Feeney. And “The ’50s ’60s: The Best of Times: Growing Up and Being Young in Britain” by Alison Pressley.

The internet is a great source too and Google was my friend. For example there are quite a few weddings in the House of Grace trilogy so sites like Pinterest were a great help. Here I looked at pictures of different dresses and took details from a few of them to come up with a beautiful gown for each of my brides. I’d search to see what fabrics were around in a specific era, satin, silk, etc, then I’d look at designs on Pinterest and maybe take something from three or four different pictures to come up with a unique gown, adding netted petticoats, broderie-anglaise bodices etc. I’d go through a similar regime for flowers and cars too. 

Growing up in Bolton as a child aided my research too, particularly for Part I of House of Grace as most of the story is set there. My visits to the townhall and museum with mummies and famous lion sentinels outside proved a valuable use of time. I was able to use these places in scenes in House of Grace when Grace stayed with her best friend, Katy, in Bolton. 

When I’m not questioning relatives or memories of Facebook groups I find Facebook friends in general are always accommodating in answering questions. In fact they love it, they feel like they are having input in the book. It’s a great feeling. For instance I may ask what the most popular toy for a ten-year-old boy was in 1962. The answers will come back in floods. 

So I suppose for me, for research, I like to wherever possible, write what I know, develop it using research, and then embellish and fictionalise to create extra drama. I love the idea of learning something new while writing. 

Blurb for The Coal Miner’s Son 

After tragedy hits the small coal mining village of Wintermore, nine-year-old miner’s son, George, is sent to Granville Hall to live with his titled grandparents. 

Caught up in a web of treachery and deceit, George grows up believing his mother sold him. He’s determined to make her pay, but at what cost? Is he strong enough to rebel? 

Will George ever learn to forgive? 

Step back into the 60s and follow George as he struggles with bereavement, rejection and a kidnapping that changes his life forever. Resistance is George’s only hope. 

About the Author 

Patricia M Osborne is married with grown-up children and grandchildren. She was born in Liverpool but now lives in West Sussex. In 2019 she graduated with an MA in Creative Writing (University of Brighton). 

Patricia writes novels, poetry and short fiction, and has been published in various literary magazines and anthologies. Her first poetry pamphlet ‘Taxus Baccata’ is to be published by Hedgehog Poetry Press during 2020. 

She has a successful blog at Patriciamosbornewriter.com where she features other writers and poets. When Patricia isn’t working on her own writing, she enjoys sharing her knowledge, acting as a mentor to fellow writers and as an online poetry tutor with Writers’ Bureau. 

The Coal Miner’s Son is the second book in the House of Grace trilogy.

Script writing tips for kids, and a new book

I’ve previously reviewed Starchild #1 by Vacen Taylor and the sequel, The City of Souls, is out now. Vacen is an interesting author because her background is in scriptwriting and I think this comes through in her fiction. She has very kindly agreed to have a chat and share some secrets, plus her tips for getting youngsters started with screen writing AND there’s a giveaway to win all four books (but you’ll have to scroll down for that).

The City of Souls Cover

How does your scriptwriting background influence your fiction writing?

Writing scripts requires a very different style of writing and requires different formatting. The other thing to remember in scriptwriting is there are no internal thoughts, so sensory details need to be found in the character’s actions but also be found in visible and audible emotions.

In screenwriting the writer would be working to reduce the details but be visual and emotional, writing as succinctly possible. Remember a feature-length screenplay is 110-120 pages in comparison to a novel which could range from 40, 000 to 100,000 pages depending on the age group and genre.

This understanding can be great for learning how to write tightly, but it can also encourage a writer to write so tightly that it fits into the reduced amount of pages. I often feel that this is a reason why my novels flow so fast because I have learned to write so tightly. So, it can be negative in some aspects.

When you write scripts, a writer is also thinking about budgets and settings. Both make a massive difference in whether the film or television series would be feasible to produce. When I participated in a short course in screenwriting, I quickly learned there was a lot more to think about when writing a script. I had to develop a script from a source text and on a tiny budget. These parameters played a significant part in my reasoning for everything; for example, the time of day or night, due to lighting cost, the sun is free!

Alternatively, when a writer is creating a novel, it is not essential to think about the cost of a budget or setting that might be a condition in filming. This freedom means when a person is writing a novel there is more room to be super creative with creating worlds. That doesn’t mean fantasy concepts don’t end up on the big screen, but they are more expensive to make, and budget considerations will drive the film’s end product. Whereas if I were writing a fantasy script, I would have to be continuingly thinking about budget and setting costs amongst other things.

 

Which character in Starchild are you most like and why?

These days I would say Mia, a resilient, self-confident and independent woman. Working with young people in my day job in the field of alcohol and other drugs, I believe a vital skill in supporting young women and men is to be resilient and independent myself. Role modelling is an important part of this work alongside a sound education and understanding how to link theory with practice and in many cases real life lived experiences.  It’s also vital to maintain empathy for others around us and in the community. Which is part of the reason some of the characters are empathic to others, but I would hope people see the contrast between the empathic characters and those who lack empathy in the series.

 

What do you include in your character profiles? 

I use a character profile sheet. Each sheet has everything from necessary information on it like, name, age, birthplace, gender and nationality. In another section, I concentrate on hair colour, eye colour, height, tattoos, scars etc. The next section includes information on a personality like, best and worst trait, secrets, enemies, what they like or don’t like. I also have a part for family, parents, siblings, boyfriends, partners and pets. Other information I include is a friends list, jobs, standing in the community or school setting.

 

You’ve built a very detailed world. What was the inspiration?

I have always been interested in energy. But the type of energy I am referring to within the series is found in the body. In the back of the book the powers of the nations are divided into 7 types from a particular source spot on the body. This is based loosely on the Chakra or energy points or nodes in the body. Forming the powers from this source inspired me to write the story. I gave each spot a strength, but with that, I realised I would be dividing the nations. It’s something like how the world of today is divided into countries and the country’s people. Which also inspired me to bring children from different nations together and along with that a mysterious child attached to a prophecy. From then on, it would be about friendship, courage, change and doing what is necessary to help each other. The Age of Akra is only a glimpse of the whole story. By the end of the third book, Long has changed a great deal and so has Akra.

 

What are you working on now?

I am working on three YA novels. One has been adapted from my short story, The Returning which was published as a shortlisted entry for the Queensland Writers Centre. The other two, first, being an apocalyptic and the other a paranormal both still requiring the ability to create unique spaces and settings that surround the characters.

 

Other than your own (of course), what are your favourite MG fantasy reads?

Song for a Whale by Lynne Kelly. And I’m looking forward to reading Far Away by Lisa Graff

 

There are lots of creative writing competitions for children, but do you know of any that specialise in scripts?

I am aware of many here in Australia. Here are a few.

ATOM Awards http://atomawards.org/  for Primary and Secondary students.

CinéfestOZ Short Film Competition https://cinefestoz.com/festival-program/cinesnaps/short-film-competition/ Encourages South West [WA] Western Australia n students 13-18 years old to explore the medium of film and use multi-media formats for production.

FlickerUp https://flickerfest.com.au/how-to-enter-flickerup/  National competition for primary and secondary school students or film-makers under 18 years old.

Sydney International Festival of Films by Children https://www.bardicstudio.com.au/festival-information

Thank you for inviting me to answer your questions. J

 

Back to the book. Here’s the blurb …

A gripping forest adventure full of mystery, betrayal and courage.

When a new sealer boy joins the journey, Mai, Long, and Akra are confident their challenges have come to an end.  But as they embark on their journey once again, they find themselves having to escape from the clutches of dangerous enemies.

They travel to Naroan – the forest lands of the soulbankers, the regulators of life and death. Against the backdrop of rules and suspicion, the children are challenged with unravelling the mystery of the Silvershade, which has been calling to Akra from the moment he arrived in the forest city. But Long is tormented by his doubts – he must face a deadly power from the Underworld before it takes him into the darkness.

Will the dark pebble take Long along a road of no return? Or will his friends find a way to help him?

Giveaway

Starchild - Giveaway Prize

Win a set of all four books …

http://www.rafflecopter.com/rafl/display/33c69494320/?

If you can’t wait for the competition, here are the purchase links

https://www.odysseybooks.com.au/titles/9781922200129/

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B07GPRK289

https://www.amazon.co.uk/gp/product/B07GPRK289

Author Bio

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Vacen Taylor is a children’s author with a portfolio of screenwriting and stage play achievements.  A selection of her poetry has been published in Art and Literature Journals. One of her plays was selected to be part of the Playwrights Program 2017 and then directed and performed as a performance reading at HOTA (previously the Gold Coast Arts Centre).

Her feature film script received a special commendation for Best Unproduced Screenplay titled Grandfathers at the British Independent Film Festival in 2018.  The logline can be found under Special Commendations for Unproduced Screenplays here.

Her TV pilot for a series (teleplay) was selected as a semi-finalist in the Hollywood Just4Shorts Film and Screenplay Competition in Los Angeles, CA. This pilot was listed in the top 50 for the Cinequest Screenwriting Competition in 2018.

She presented the first mental health panel at OZ Comic-Con in 2017. This panel was a fantastic opportunity to discuss openly and honestly about artists and their mental health to help support wellbeing, foster connectivity and provide a culture of support.

In 2018 she presented the panel, ‘An artist’s guide to creative happiness: How to strengthen your creative performance’ at Oz Comic-Con in Brisbane. Her panels are extraordinary opportunities to explore ideas with people who are currently working in the industry. She aims to discuss subjects like individualism, the community, mental health, wellbeing, happiness, creativity, co-creating and self-awareness which often leads to interesting questions from the audience.

What else does she do? Vacen is also a creative workshop facilitator and proficient in, teaching, speaking and concept creation. Guest Speaker. Workshop Presenter. Creative Panel Facilitator. Mentor. Support Worker. Counsellor. Social Welfare Advocate.

 AND IF YOU”D LIKE TO SEE WHAT VACEN LOOKED LIKE AS A CHILD, YOU”LL NEED TO SIGN UP TO THE #KIDSCLUB  Join the free #kidsclub

 

Social Media Links –  

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Twitter – https://twitter.com/VacenTaylor

Story telling on Spirit FM

Most of you will know I ran an illustration competition for kids earlier this year – it’s a great way to engage readers and the community – and I’m passionate about getting kids writing, so I was really excited when I heard local author Lynne Healy had teamed up with radio station SpiritFM with a unique creative writing competition.

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Here’s Lynne to tell us what happened …

Earlier this year I was lucky enough to win an advertising package with Spirit FM, our local radio station. As I have created Birdham Bear to inspire children to find and express ‘their unique’ I thought a fun way to use it would be to run a creative writing competition for children in West Sussex. The brief was simple: children aged 11 and under were invited to write a short story, up to 500 words, on anything that inspired them.

Spirit were very impressed with the number of entries. Judging was a challenge as the stories were all so unique. In the end it was easy to choose Willow as the winner. She was one of the youngest entrants and her story was simple and fun with a delightful message of kindness that both. Birdham Bear and I loved. We also both agreed that we’d love to blow bubbles every time we speak!

The radio presenters recorded her story.
https://www.spiritfm.net/win/creative-writing-competition/

Round up of the Creative Writing Skills book tour

I literally have no idea how to start, but I wanted to thank all the amazing book bloggers who took my Creative Writing Skills Workbook on tour! I’m thrilled with the response it’s received, not to mention the many requests for more books for different ages, pocket-sized books, and also a grown-up workbook.

Creative Writing Front Cover

Anyway, the formatting is lousy but here are all the links – happy browsing 🙂

Thanks again,

Lexi

Blog Name Blog Tour Content
Laura’s Interests https://dogsmomvisits.blogspot.com/2019/10/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees.html
Mai’s Musings https://maitaylor567291325.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/creative-writing-skills-lexi-rees/
Broad Thoughts From A Home https://broad-thoughts-from-a-home.blogspot.com/2019/10/book-review-creative-writing-skills-by.html?fbclid=IwAR0GPVM-1wVdK64ybYHBrZ9aNioxOTbqsY-c1X1TZZU7JkCgArEkehvCJmk
Babydolls and razorblades https://babydollsandrazorblades.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/book-reviewcreative-writing-skills-over-70-fun-activities-for-children-by-lexi-rees/
Historical Fiction with Spirit https://jennifercwilsonwriter.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/book-review-lexi-rees-creative-writing-skills/
Radzy Writes http://www.vainradical.co.uk/blogs/creative-writing-skills-review/
B for bookreview https://bforbookreview.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/creative-writing-skills-lexi-rees-promopost-blogblitz-rararesources-lexi_rees/
Love the Smell of a Book https://lovethesmellofabook.com/2019/10/07/review-today-we-are-really-excited-to-be-joining-the-blog-blitz-for-creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees-creativewritingskills-backablogger-blogblitz-rararesources-lexi_rees/?fbclid=IwAR0tlEilKcClMsdL5cpyKtzMXRvB3mqeGNdVM69NW9AB0jmTuPjm1puhIPc
Southern Girl Bookaholic https://www.southerngirlbookaholic.com/2019/10/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees.html
World Geekly News https://worldgeeklynews.com/books/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees-review/?fbclid=IwAR3_6qsFenN892F7vRuxOr-XGd_CiddwavzNe3ub_iS1BKqyTApm2-ZIh6c
Through Novel Time & Distance https://scarlettreadzandrunz.com/blog-tours/2019/10/6/creative-writing-skills-over-70-fun-activities
Bookworm for Kids https://bookwormforkids.blogspot.com/2019/10/creative-writing-skills-over-70-fun.html
Jazzy Book Reviews https://bookreviewsbyjasmine.blogspot.com/2019/10/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees.html
donnasbookblog https://donnasbookblog.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/blogblitz-bookreview-for-creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees-rararesources-creativewritingskills/
Reviews by Prisha https://prishayadav.blogspot.com/2019/10/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees.html?fbclid=IwAR2NLdLKfwA7vyoedFXyLTfckfrihIlWvRkj17cxM9_WApm_wWuh_hIrQkU
Nesie’s Place https://nesiesplace.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/1dayblogblitz-creative-writing-skills/
Rachel Bustin https://rachelbustin.com/books/creative-writing-skills-over-70-fun-activities-for-children/
The Book Moo https://thebookmoo.wordpress.com/2019/10/08/blog-tour-creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees/
My baby and my books https://mybabymybooksandi.wordpress.com/2019/10/08/book-review-of-creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees/
Splashes Into Books https://splashesintobooks.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/creative-writing-skills/
Twirling Book Princess https://twirlingbookprincess.com/2019/10/blog-tour-book-blitz-creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees/
Cat and Mouse Reading http://catandmousereading.blogspot.com/2019/10/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees.html?m=1#more
Linda’s Book Bag https://lindasbookbag.com/2019/10/07/creative-writing-skills-over-70-fun-activities-for-children-by-lexi-rees/
Herding Cats https://likeherdingcatsblog.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/creative-writing-skills-by-lexi-rees-blog-blitz/
Ellesea Loves Reading https://norwayellesea.blogspot.com/2019/10/new-release-spotlight-creative-writing.html
Dash Fan Book Reviews https://dashfan81.blogspot.com/2019/10/blog-tour-creative-writing-skills.html
Jane Hunt Writer https://jolliffe01.com/2019/10/07/creative-writing-skills-lexi-rees-4review-lexi_rees-rararesources-lexirees-outsetpublishing-creativewritingskills-childrensbooks-kidlit-nonfiction-workbook-writing-7-blogblitz/
The Photographer’s Way https://www.thephotographersway.org/creative-writing-skills-review/
Novel Kicks http://www.novelkicks.co.uk/book-review-creative-writing-skills-over-70-fun-activities-for-children-by-lexi-rees/

How to get started writing fiction

Probably the question I get asked most by keen young authors is where do I get my ideas, which has a very long answer. The children then drill down into the how of writing, which is why I’m so excited to have just published my Creative Writing Skills workbook. As an author, I spend a lot of time thinking about the technical side of writing, and have a long list of books I recommend to other authors including On Writing by Stephen King (the audio version narrated by himself is amazing), Save the Cat Writes a Novel (the title does make sense, honestly!) and The Emotion Thesaurus (the rest of the series is still on my wish list).

Writing Fiction a user-friendly guide (1)

Writing Fiction – a user-friendly guide is a very readable beginners guide, half the length of the hefty On Writing. It sets out some great examples from really well known books (and some films, paralleling Save the Cat in approach) which keeps it highly accessible and I’d recommend it to those getting started in creative writing and looking to hone their skills. Given it’s quite short and covers a lot of ground, I’d also recommend it to GCSE/ A level students to help them understand the tools and techniques used by the authors they are studying.

Blurb

The twenty-four chapters cover every important matter you need to know about, including: devising a compelling story, creating and developing characters, plotting, ‘plants’, backstory, suspense, dialogue, ‘show’ and ‘tell’, and how to make your novel more real than reality.

Also featuring special guest advice from legendary screenwriter Bob Gale, who wrote the three immortal Back to the Futuremovies (1985, 1989 and 1990), and novelist and screenwriter William Osborne, whose many screen credits include the co-writing of the blockbuster  Twins (1988), this highly entertaining book gives you all the advice and practical guidance you need to make your dream of becoming a published fiction writer come true.

Purchase Links

https://www.amazon.co.uk/Writing-Fiction-user-friendly-James-Essinger-ebook/dp/B07VYY9XH9/

https://www.amazon.com/Writing-Fiction-user-friendly-James-Essinger-ebook/dp/B07VYY9XH9/


Author Bio

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James Essinger has been a professional writer since 1988. His non-fiction books include Jacquard’s Web (2004),Ada’s Algorithm(2013), which is to be filmed by Monumental Pictures, and Charles and Ada: the computer’s most passionate partnership (2019).His novels include The Mating Game(2016) and The Ada Lovelace Project(2019).

Social Media Links

https://www.facebook.com/james.essinger  

https://twitter.com/jamesessinger